Cloudy Moon Sumie Yamato Hyougu

This was an additional cloudy Moon scroll that has been sold to a bonsai artist. It is painted by Mariusz Szmerdt. I made this in a more traditional Yamato Hyougu style, to go with an informal styled tree such as a bunjin style pine or conifer.

The cloths on the top and bottom are a benberugu silk, in the shike style. The chuumawashi is a Shoken (pure silk) and the ichimonji and fuutai are made of a Shinkinran.

Dimensions as follows:

Name in Kanji	Name in English	Size in Bun	Size in Inches
天	Ten	88.5	10.56
上中廻し	Ue Chuumawashi	35.5	4.23
上一文字	Ue Ichimonji	11	1.31
紙本の幅さ	Artwork Width	112	13.36
紙本の長さ	Artwork Length	203	24.22
柱	Pillars	18	2.15
下一文字	Shita Ichimonji	7	0.84
下中廻し	Shita Chuumawashi	21	2.51
地	Chi	55	6.56
掛け軸の幅さ	Scroll Width	148	17.66
掛け軸の長さ	Scroll Length	410	48.91

Bonsai Kazari Critique

This critique is provided by Kuzuhara Hiroyuki, a Shihan rank bonsai display specialist. He wrote and sent this in Japanese, and I have translated it. The photos are from the Toko Kazari competition at the Clark Center for Japanese Art and Culture.

The critique of this display. The original display is on the left and the revised display with Kuzuhara Senseis recommendations is on the right.

This Shohin bonsai display when looking at a first glance seems to acheive unity among all the elements, but there are a few points of mistake in the rules of display.

First off, when displaying a Kengai or Hankengai as the main tree, it is good to use the tall table placed on top of this type of large jiita. However, this tree, with its thin trunk and styling would be considered more of a bunjin styling, and in this case it would be better to not use the table and place the bonsai directly on the jiita. Also, when using this type of large jiita it is a common rule if you are using an accent piece to place the accent in the upper right corner behind the tree.

The second point is that the height of this kusamono is too high.

The third point is that the picture in the scroll works well for this display, but for such a small (shohin size and thin trunk) tree, the scroll is much too big. I have made changes to the display to show how I think this would be an improved display. Please look at the two pictures. For the revision, I have used a Kuzuya, which is the way houses in olden times looked in Japan with the thatched grass roofs.Click image for larger version Name: No4-Shin_No_Shin_Scroll Revised Kuzuhara.jpg Views: 16 Size: 48.4 KB ID: 19352